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Pretty Life by ButterKnife Pretty Life by ButterKnife
I didn't want to put this under poetry even though that's the main point behind it, but I'm a horrible writer... So Hmm, I just wanted to site the meaning behind what I did because that's the only thing important about it to me, I know it's not very good... But I just like um, this is how I feel right now. And I hope that the person that this is dedicated to sees it because like... I know I'm not good with words, and hopefully this will explain something... I hope...

Pretty Life
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Another time,
Another time I grin,
Just hoping to make up for your lonely nights,

I'm dreaming of your love,
Strangling me every hour,
Mangling me, your lonely dead flower,

Falling on foreign ground,
Holding this note in my hand,
Lonely inspiration only telling me just where to stand,

I'm still putting your dreams in my screams,
So please don't tell me to fuck off,

Right now if I could just breathe your voice,
If I could just,
Hmm, if I could just...

But I'll just be waiting,
Nothing more to do but wait around,
Strumming hidden fingers down my face,
Thinking of your pretty taste...

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nino4art Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2005  Professional Digital Artist
awesome
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LonelyEyes Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2005
the poem was so beautiful and u know im a writer so i know what im taking about. keeep it up.
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f4ever Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2005   Photographer
:hug:. That's so sad V_V'.
From an artistic aspect, you're great at choosing words ^_^'.
: gives you a note that says he cares and begs you to stop being sad =P (like you can really control emotions based on requests..) :
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Methrinn Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2005
Za-ah-wow. That is amazing... *hugs you to death* I loves loves loves it! it's so awesome....
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DemonicAngelSuicide Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2005   Writer
oh how pretty :D
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broken-butterfly Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2005
tis beautiful. the writing and the image. straight to faves :nod:
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ButterKnife Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2005
Ahh I lurve you hehe <333333333333. I missed you toooo, you have to take more pictures hehe. I wantt to seeee.
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TylerHagan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2005  Professional Interface Designer
Well done sweety :D The Image Is really good. And the poem :jawdrop: hmm is amazing! You hardly let me see this side of you! I want more more more :boogie:
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ButterKnife Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2005
Hehe, I'm sorry I'm such a horrible write >.<. I just hoped you liked it, and when you call me sweety I die on the inside hehe.

* runs *
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ButterKnife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2005
:heart:

Even though you probably won't see this till tommorow, I hope you had a really good sleep :), like the best sleep you can have. And I hope you still love me hehe. And if you're at work, I hope you're not bored, and if you are bored, I hope you havee fun hehe. I miss you so much...
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